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    dots Submission Name: missing you deeplydots
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    Author: annezah
    ASL Info:    19/f/long island NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.5 - 14/15/16
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsmissing you deeplydots
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    Have you ever bothered to realize
    how much you mean to me?
    I care so much for you inside
    and miss you so deeply.

    My mind is always curious about
    the way things might have been.
    As days go by and time goes by,
    I look back once again.

    All the time I held you in my arms,
    I had the whole world right there.
    There you were, comforting me with
    all of your charms.

    Every little kiss from you
    was like a dream come true.
    This love that I have inside my heart,
    it all belonged to you!

    It's funny, all those little things
    I never thought I'd miss,
    Like all those conversations we had,
    or the first time we kissed.

    I guess that what I'm trying to say,
    is I miss and love you more each day!
    It hurts me not to see you,
    or not to know if you're ok.

    I want you to understand
    that I loved you from the start.
    And I want you to know,
    no matter how many miles
    we may be apart,
    you'll always hold a special place
    in my heart.




    Submitted on 2008-05-29 10:35:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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