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    dots Submission Name: im still heredots
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    Author: annezah
    ASL Info:    19/f/long island NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.5 - 14/15/16
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsim still heredots
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    I'll admit it's been hard without you,
    Ever since you've left and gone.
    Every time I tried to do the same,
    I'd find myself still holding on.

    I never forgot about us,
    How our hearts intertwined.
    In my dreams we were together again,
    You were always on my mind.

    I know you've been through some rough times,
    You were alone.
    It was hard to sleep at night,
    Knowing tomorrow you'd be on your own.

    Don't lose hope in yourself,
    Don't close the door to your heart.
    I'm still right there for you,
    Like I promised from the start.




    Submitted on 2008-05-29 10:40:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow that was really good! I like poems like this cause they remind me of relationships. Its like this was so easy to write but has so much passion in it. Like you honestly wrote this from your heart. Nice write.

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    | Posted on 2008-05-29 00:00:00 | by shadowmere88 | [ Reply to This ]


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