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    dots Submission Name: I want to start overdots

    Author: annezah
    ASL Info:    19/f/long island NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.5 - 14/15/16
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 708
    Average Vote:    4.5000
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    dotsI want to start overdots

    I'm finally hopeful
    for once in my life
    I believe we can make it
    with no pain and no strife

    I want so very much
    for you to be here with me
    It seems so long ago
    that it was us or we

    I miss that sparkle in your eye
    and the smile on your face
    but more than any other
    I miss the love in your embrace

    I know that we can try again
    we can make a whole new start
    I'll hold onto your love
    and make sure we never part

    Because like no other in my life
    I love you with all my heart
    I'll never let you go again
    we can make a brand new start

    Submitted on 2008-05-29 10:43:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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