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    dots Submission Name: My flamedots
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    Author: Selene
    ASL Info:    20/f/ US
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 149/159/53
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 60
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 385



    Description:
       This poem is a poem about a person in my life who i'm completely enchanted by.


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    dotsMy flamedots
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    Beautifull and majestic
    yet dangerous and unpredictable
    completely enchanting
    magnetic to my eyes
    drawing me into its grace
    with every thought i drift
    just a little bit closer
    to experience the beauty
    in all of its entirity
    Yet i risk getting too close
    and being destroyed
    like a moth to its flame.




    Submitted on 2008-05-29 12:40:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      and lemmings to thier cliffs... sounds like one of those "Journey more important then the destination" pieces. maybe round it out by letting us in on what is the flame to your moth, or the moth to your flame?
    | Posted on 2008-05-30 00:00:00 | by caveman | [ Reply to This ]



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