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    dots Submission Name: Just to have youdots
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    Author: koolness
    ASL Info:    17/female/city of evil
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 80/106/56
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 82
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 346



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    dotsJust to have youdots
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    I close my eyes wishing to see your face,
    wanting your lips, so that I can taste
    I hold my breath, thinking of you,
    hoping you feel that same way I do.
    Wanting you close wanting you near,
    wanting you so bad that I fear.
    Just to have you in my arms is all I ask,
    knowing our love will forever last.




    Submitted on 2008-05-29 14:40:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      "Juat" second to last line, "Just", a bit saccharin sweet, "wanting you so bad that I fear." ??? Fear what, and how will you combat said fear? Think on it, I'm sure it'll come to ya.
    | Posted on 2008-05-30 00:00:00 | by caveman | [ Reply to This ]



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