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    dots Submission Name: Hanging Updots
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    Author: Zyiera
    ASL Info:    17/F
    Elite Ratio:    1.08 - 9/4/6
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 85
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 414



    Description:
       Okay, this is still just a beginning, but I need some opinions...I'm kinda stuck!! haha. But no this has never happened to me!


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    dotsHanging Updots
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    Hanging up the phone again
    Didn't want to be just friends
    But you chose to push me away (push me away)
    Here I am just laying here
    (Can't you see me?)

    So I fall
    So I crawl
    So I cry
    So I die

    You played those games
    Will you remember me?
    Why'd you take my heart
    You broke it into so many peices




    Submitted on 2008-05-29 15:49:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ah, the start of a promising lyric.... stuck? I dunno, how about a word bank?

    loss
    past
    present
    gain
    train
    rain
    more
    tears
    | Posted on 2008-08-13 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]



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