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    dots Submission Name: the fingers of my undoingdots

    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 188
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsthe fingers of my undoingdots

    my heart is a forest
    with it's graveyard of a surface floor
    & it's cathedral ceiling.
    don't ask me if i'm really here,
    i'm just the miracle
    that i've always been.

    these eyes
    are a collage of ghosts
    that wait here
    for the inexplicable moment
    of your return.
    that wait here,
    for the cardinal everything.

    if i test
    the surface of the world
    for truth,
    i come back with the feeling
    that i've lost something.
    & that i can only gain it back
    by moving into myself
    the ocean of my love.

    i know that i deserve
    the abundant always.
    i'm just pacing till it comes around.
    if i stare at the poem of my face
    i can become forgetful
    of who i truly am.
    i can forget
    to open doors
    into my thunder perfect mind.

    i wash
    but the beast is everywhere,
    childhood rumors
    that i've learned to forget.
    eternity is a breath
    that i saved for the one
    who holds me,
    despite any harsh round compromise,
    in highest honor in her heart.

    the fingers of my undoing
    are never there...

    Submitted on 2008-05-29 17:01:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this one. I can't exactly put my finger on it, but the entirety is very emotive and very descriptive, moving in its simplicity.

    I'm surprised I hadn't found you before, I'll have to keep an eye out for more of your work.
    | Posted on 2008-05-31 00:00:00 | by DemonicInk | [ Reply to This ]

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