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    dots Submission Name: Widows of Gossipdots
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    Author: vampirefreak69
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 30/94/72
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    dotsWidows of Gossipdots
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    words
    cut from tongue to tongue
    daily news of the latest scandals
    idle chatter for bored maidens
    housewives
    looking for some torrid details
    to satisfy their dying hearts

    did you hear
    Lord Louie
    ran off
    with that Ella, girl?

    I heard
    the preacher's girl
    got one on the way

    rumors to titillate
    the starving souls
    beauty parlor fairy tales
    stretched from a ounce of truth
    covering the masses

    headlines created through whispers
    sold over the fish and dresses
    slander killing the coveted
    mentioned
    mannequin of accusations
    rebuttal to deaf ears
    truth laying in the gutter
    gleaming to be heard

    the accused appears
    shunned by the widows
    of gossip speech
    put on display
    on trial
    through the stares
    never knowing the inferno of lies
    about to fall upon her

    whore
    slut
    bastard child

    letters emblazoned on her blouse
    led to the bottle 'n gun
    bullets take away the misunderstanding
    her life ended
    through the pins 'n needles
    daggers, stones cast upon her
    the lies, the soil
    she was buried in
    branded just another
    dead whore.




    Submitted on 2008-05-29 22:38:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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