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    Author: vampirefreak69
    Elite Ratio:    2.19 - 30/99/82
    Words: 251
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    What wonder
    granted me
    this skewed view,
    that allows me to
    snatch words from
    the endless scurrying
    of my world.

    Holding each restless
    possibility in my mind,
    till they roll
    off my tongue,
    in a syncopated
    melody that moves me
    to pen them
    like wild animals.

    Expressive creatures
    giving voice,
    snarling within
    a white rectangle,
    formed from the
    pulp of long
    ago dead trees
    I have never climbed.

    How does the
    center of a tulip
    compare to any
    common adjectives,
    and yet my hand
    flies in a blur,
    and poetry blooms.

    Are war and love,
    simply fodder
    for the mind of
    a starving artist?
    often fed in poor taste
    or suckled in
    heated fervor,
    and consumed by
    the need to
    capture their
    impacts in
    some new way.

    What well do
    we draw from
    when we compose
    endless, flowing
    liquidic thoughts
    poured out,
    for others eyes
    to drink from?

    It matters not,
    for this blessing
    needs no rhyme
    nor reason,
    it simply is
    my take on life
    and oh, how
    I delight in
    stealing from
    my needy muse.

    " Walt had the Whit man,
    Elizabeth Barrett Browning
    perfected the seering
    of her food for thought,
    and I have the art,
    tis why I breathe."




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