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    dots Submission Name: Who are you, beautiful chimeradots

    Author: emoxday
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 113/123/144
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
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       blah listening to Lareine "Metamorphose" He was singing this to me. It is like others I've done I know D : enjoy

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    dotsWho are you, beautiful chimeradots

    Endless thoughts of you
    and to think you might never be true
    the pain is so insufferable
    my thirst for you so strong

    nights of endless void
    I crave you more when the stars are out
    an unfaltering face as clear as the moon
    with you I will always be content

    Everlasting empty skies
    The longing for something that will never come through
    trapped I can only muse over you
    and yet I can never know if you were an illusion

    you are the never ending sky
    I grasp the air but you're never there
    on the tip of my thoughts you are
    you've never spoken a promise to me

    And all I want to do it reach out and touch you
    all I want to know is that you are not the thought
    that I have dreamt

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