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    dots Submission Name: tiny tearsdots
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    Author: annezah
    ASL Info:    19/f/long island NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.5 - 14/15/16
    Words: 188
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 731
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    Description:
       this doesnt go out to anyone- i just like to put myself in situations-


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    dotstiny tearsdots
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    The tears stream down my cheek
    As I hold the phone to my ear
    We go through this all again
    It's these arguments I fear.
    Somebody's in the wrong
    And usually it's me
    I try so hard to be perfect
    If only you could see.
    Your voice is full of anger
    And it tears me up inside
    Knowing that I made you mad
    It always makes me cry.
    I don't ever want to lose you
    Because boy, you are my life
    And I know that you do love me
    I can see it in your eyes.
    So why must we argue
    The silence and the tears
    Night after night it goes on
    Not a happy word, I hear.
    I know that now is tough
    And we've been through some hard times
    But we can make it through this
    Remember happy times.
    No matter what is said or done
    No matter what we go through
    One thing remains constant
    I will always love you.
    And any time you're unsure
    You can't deal with the strife
    Remember one thing is true
    You're the love of my life.





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