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    dots Submission Name: I WAS mommys princessdots
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    Author: annezah
    ASL Info:    19/f/long island NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.5 - 14/15/16
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsI WAS mommys princessdots
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    Mommy don't you cry
    your princess is right here
    she is sitting real close by
    can you feel her near?

    mommy don't you cry
    its all going to be ok
    I'm wiping your tears dry
    tomorrows a better day

    mommy don't you cry
    I'll hold you for a while
    let your princess try
    and tickle on your smile

    mommy don't you cry
    your princess is right here
    she is sitting real close by
    can you feel her near?





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