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    dots Submission Name: Make Peacedots
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    Author: Porcelaine
    ASL Info:    21/F/Croatia
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 850/653/234
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angst
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    dotsMake Peacedots
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    In the wake of foul blood
    I hold to the light that keeps me whole
    With restraints of a crying man
    Whose love is lost, at last, to the sound of cruelty

    So as my heart grows heretic…it's beat bewitched
    I lay it to my palms
    And put it to sleep until the days grow kinder
    To the strays of innocence

    The long sleep at last…makes me safe.

    And I dare to dream




    Submitted on 2008-05-30 14:58:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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