Be Something New -------------------------------------------
I'm in hate with myself
Stay away from that damn mirror
Eat the pain away.
Nothing could hurt you again
Nothing will hurt you again.
As long as you're careful
As long as you watch yourself.
Stop the memories
Stop the thoughts and stop
The lies and deception.
At night the horror movies
Play in my head with those
Horrible memories.
I can't stand those damn mirrors
That taunt and remind me that
I have to be myself. Damn it
I want to switch lives and be
Someone new.
ANGSTYYYY . . . . . . . . .
but my poems are angsty too.
well . . . . . . .
I really like this piece because I just think its something that soooo many people can relate to. Everybody goes through something like this at one point in their lives and yeah . . .
. . . its gonna be hard
. . . youre gonna cry
. . . youre gonna feel alone
. . . it may seem like your worlds gonna end
but its not. Youll finally come the realization that there are people out there with lives much worse than what yours is like. I really hope you feel better because depression id obviously not a good feeling . . . . and alot of the times it makes you do stupid things.
Overall -
I really liked it. It seems like you put a lot of heart into this piece and I really felt as tho I could relate to your poem. . . especially this part :
Stay away from that damn mirror
Eat the pain away.
Nothing could hurt you again
Nothing will hurt you again.
As long as you're careful
As long as you watch yourself.
Submission Name: Be Something New
