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    dots Submission Name: All the Stars in the Sky...dots

    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsAll the Stars in the Sky...dots

    Staring at the night sky,
    the moon catches my attention
    set against the beautiful stars;
    they couldn't compare to her.

    Submitted on 2008-05-30 18:22:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow this is beautiful...itz somewhat subtle yet so openly honest...good one..
    | Posted on 2008-06-07 00:00:00 | by EsCaPisT | [ Reply to This ]

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