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    dots Submission Name: Dignity. (not completely finished.)dots
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    Author: vampirefreak69
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 30/94/72
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    dotsDignity. (not completely finished.)dots
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    We can change you
    The way you look, the way you think
    We can control you
    Your every move, your every thought
    Thrown through plastic surgery and mental evaluations
    Shock therapy, botox, hair dye, and lipstick
    Let’s make you beautiful
    Let’s make you fabulous
    Let’s make you just like everyone else
    Stand out from the crowd
    That’s what you’re told to do
    But if everyone is standing out
    You’re really just blending in,
    Aren’t you?
    Eating disorders and fast cars
    That’s all we really want
    Sure, you’re just skin and bones,
    But that’s what’s “in”
    That is what makes you gorgeous
    What do we lose living like this?
    What do we give up?
    Nothing, right? Nothing.
    What about the dream?
    Just, that damn dream.
    Because all we ever really lose
    Is our dignity and our dreams.




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