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    dots Submission Name: our kiss <3dots
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    Author: Queen_of_spades
    ASL Info:    17/f/under your bed
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 90/138/83
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 84
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 775



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       Forever yours, my love-

    I am forever yours.


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    dotsour kiss <3dots
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    We breathe heavily as we face each other
    Hearts at a race as the truth uncovers
    Down my neck
    Rolls a drop of sweat
    As I realize just where we're at
    Anxious yet nervous
    Scared is not the word but,
    What would happen if someone heard us
    The thought quickly leaves
    As you come even closer to me
    My heart skips and I forget to breathe
    A quarter inch from you
    I can't run, but why would I want to?
    You know I want you, and I see that you want me too
    My arms slowly wrap around your waist
    Your sweetness I prepare to taste
    We tilt heads and our lips barely touch
    Slowly part, then back again,
    This time quenching tongue’s thirst for lust




    Submitted on 2008-05-31 01:52:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Girls and there writing, anyways the moment of a pre-kiss is beautiful. I mean you do it well, its not descriptive, yet not boring, so props to that pretty lady
    Kevin
    | Posted on 2008-05-31 00:00:00 | by every48seconds | [ Reply to This ]



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