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    dots Submission Name: The Deepdots

    Author: JAcksonJr
    ASL Info:    20/Male/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 56/116/57
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 734
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       The ocean's revenge in liar's lungs

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    dotsThe Deepdots

    She held on to a promise
    one that from the start
    was cast to sea
    but she couldn't see
    for the time she waited
    as the ocean spread its waves
    to every land but her own
    she waited in silence
    with unyielding endurance
    for the hour that she would hear
    the footsteps approaching near
    but sometimes the sea
    is more wrathful than fair
    and sometimes promises
    are only made of air
    her tear is the only ripple
    this ocean will ever return

    this captain was lost
    before his sails touched the wind
    he left on a journey
    that he wasn't ready to begin
    when her ripples hit his ship
    the ocean took its grip
    and the water's embrace
    is still wrathful
    to those of no faith.

    and what she got in return
    wasn't the object for which she yearned
    but instead she heard a whisper
    carried gently by the wind
    saying, "In return for promises unkept
    and a curse of a princess, who wept,
    'This I send out to sea,
    a tear for the man I thought you'd be'
    I now descend beneath
    to the ocean’s wrathful deep.”

    Submitted on 2008-05-31 10:21:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Holy [censored] dude that was so damn cool, pure favorite now,couldn't improve,love it lots,peace out!

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