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    dots Submission Name: Cold Harvestdots
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    Author: Porcelaine
    ASL Info:    21/F/Croatia
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 867/671/243
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 129
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 469



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    dotsCold Harvestdots
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    They walk, like pallid lost,
    In plethora of merging scars
    Through battlehills of frost
    That radiates the stars

    One - a sinner, two - a rebel,
    Third is just a memory
    Wakened by a cringing treble
    In it's grave of emery.

    Now they march the rage of hordes,
    Old as winding olive trees,
    Warding on the fallen lords
    'Till their tired eyes don't freeze.





    Submitted on 2008-05-31 12:14:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love this, though I am not really sure what it is about. Or perhaps that is the very reason I love it. I can just soak in its beauty and let my mind run wild.
    | Posted on 2008-07-01 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]
      nicely done.

    the counting bit is clever and snappy.




    feeling brainless at the moment.



    whee~
    rachel
    | Posted on 2008-06-02 00:00:00 | by sadtrapofgravit | [ Reply to This ]


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