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    dots Submission Name: Jealousydots
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    Author: revol
    ASL Info:    18/F/Far away from you
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 12/13/11
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 69
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 468



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    dotsJealousydots
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    He belongs to me,
    He made me who I am today
    And they can't ever feel what I feel,
    And they can never take him away.

    Europe, America, Africa or Asia,
    You will always be with me
    Whatever they say
    Or whatever they do
    They can't see what I can see.

    Pretty homosexual rhymes,
    Forced and painful oh so,
    I claim you, and don't give a fuck,
    Wherever you may go.




    Submitted on 2008-05-31 14:27:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thank you for the comment on my poem. I did actually find better and he treats me so respectful. I love this poem it actually kind of reminds me of how i use to feel about somone. Thank you Again!
    | Posted on 2008-07-02 00:00:00 | by xXTorn2piecesxX | [ Reply to This ]
      well that was pretty raw.

    "Pretty homosexual rhymes,
    Forced and painful oh so"

    that stuck out like mad, which got my attention, which was cool, its sweetly sad, seeing how mcuh it puts out for love, i guess,improvements? umm lenght, i think , could've been longer, and evaluate a bit more, cause i am pretty lost.but overall cool, so yeah, kudos to you gril, kudos to you

    Kevin
    | Posted on 2008-05-31 00:00:00 | by every48seconds | [ Reply to This ]



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