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    dots Submission Name: Blossomdots
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    Author: marray proetus
    ASL Info:    100/F/no where
    Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 24/32/30
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsBlossomdots
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    There is a new blossom
    In the garden of my heart
    The other flowers are whispering a secret
    Saying that they are displeased
    With how different we both are.
    Your fragrance is of hidden grief
    Because our differences are sealing a
    Stubborn stone wall,
    Making us be distant and apart

    I break through
    Not accepting the rules
    That the world sets on us.
    Listen with your heart
    There is a melody in the air,
    The breeze blows and I hum a song
    Let everyone be dazed
    So donít be quiet and speechless
    Let the melody flow from your heart
    Sing with me and end all distances.




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