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Different
Living in a crowded world
With busy lives that revolve
Around these noise boxes
Grinding against my inner ear.
Legs that know where the destination
Of where the mind lives
I am carried off into a faraway world.
Everything moves slowly
As I separate myself
From the people around me.
I just sit there
Watching the world go by
People move along with their lives
Not noticing that I’ve been carried away
To a place faraway
I hear the bell ring loud
My hands pull my earphones out
A sudden jolt of reality pulls at me
As I become one among the many in the halls
I am no longer alone
But never felt lonelier.
This write I really enjoyed!!
To me you are speaking of a Persons first day in High School and how looking back at it they can easily reflect of the situation and all the lessons learned in High School
I for one believe yhe lessons I learned in High School that were not taught to me by a teacher easilly outweigh the life lessons taught to me by those teaches
Great Work!!!
Thank You very much for the quick trip down memory lane!!!
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
God Bless
Ron
This sounds rather surreal to me. It seems as though you were captivated and frozen by something.... it feels as if you had had an epiphany. Maybe you were daydreaming.... it's quite scintillating and I do relate to the feeling you know.... we do get, at times, paralyzed or mesmerized with or without an apparent reason .... I do know why but it does happen.... maybe its frequency is somehow determined by one's experiences or the kind of people we happen to be.... dunno ... I'm not really well versed in the subject.
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