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    dots Submission Name: Phantomdots
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    Author: DemonicInk
    ASL Info:    21/F/Gypsie
    Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 29/10/28
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Gothic
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    dotsPhantomdots
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    You crept into my heart
    Like a thief
    I didn't even feel you there
    Til it was too late
    Now I can't help but feel for you
    It's beyond my control

    You're the ghost in my heart
    Always lingering there
    You're my phantom
    Bringing me low

    I can't sleep at night
    You have taken over my thoughts
    Dreaming of the day I'll see your face
    Behind the mask of the one who has stolen my heart

    You're the ghost deep inside
    Always lingering there
    You're my phantom of the opera
    Hidden deep inside my mind




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