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    dots Submission Name: Good Thing They Keep a Watch On Youdots
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    Author: vanhokinshtyl
    ASL Info:    8/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 119/200/71
    Words: 347
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 686
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2046



    Description:
       wasting time and how one single decision is like taking a whole different 'street'


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    dotsGood Thing They Keep a Watch On Youdots
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    Iíve got all the time in the world
    Iím wasting it all bit by bit
    Iíve got all the time in the world to spend slowly
    Iíve watched this pot boil over
    I take time with a grain of salt
    Cause I count as a grain evolves into a mountain

    Read between all the lines cause something thereís hidden
    Youíll never find it, that something is missing
    In all of these years, Iíve never found a clue
    Good thing they keep a watch on you

    In all this time Iíve taken for granted I gotta take control of the little things
    Theyíve made us who we are (weíre drowning, weíre drowning in quicksand)
    In all this time Iíve been take advantage of I shouldíve taken control of the little things
    They got us where we are (weíre drowning, weíre drowning in quicksand)

    I see bits and pieces of the past
    I wore my life out like a mask
    Iíve got all the time in the world to waste away
    I take time with a grain of salt
    Thatís all it is, another drop in the ocean
    It looks from here like our time is running out

    Read between all the lines cause something thereís hidden
    Youíll never find it, that something is missing
    In all of these years, Iíve never found a clue
    Good thing you keep a watch on you

    In all this time Iíve taken for granted I gotta take control of the little things
    Theyíve made us who we are (weíre drowning, weíre drowning in quicksand)
    In all this time Iíve been take advantage of I shouldíve taken control of the little things
    They got us where we are (weíre drowning, weíre drowning in quicksand)

    When you receive your paycheck, you cash it
    And spend it in small doses
    But nobody knows (itís)
    Itís the smallest things that hurt the most

    Iíve let time pass me by it seems
    On the road to life and Iím on traffic jammed streets
    I predict an accident ahead (either way)..




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      Its like a song.
    "Itís the smallest things that hurt the most" is my favorit line.

    Enjoy the time because the older you get the faster it goes.

    Another thing, this is a good write. A little Choppy, but i am just as bad.
    | Posted on 2008-06-02 00:00:00 | by snufthepunk28 | [ Reply to This ]


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