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    dots Submission Name: Chameleon, Chameleondots
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    Author: vanhokinshtyl
    ASL Info:    8/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 119/200/71
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       People who are very 'omni-fitted' are fake to themselves


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    dotsChameleon, Chameleondots
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    Living to survive
    If it’s coalescence
    Keeping you alive
    When you die
    What will you have lived for?
    How will you define life?
    Not moving, just changing
    For your surroundings
    You're losing what you’re gaining
    To rest on a branch

    Chameleon, chameleon
    You’ve become like/the night
    Chameleon, chameleon
    Your design is right
    (but who’s to say it’s wrong
    Who‘s to say you‘re just like all those creatures)

    You blend in for them
    You rest on the tree
    Like the rest of the leaves
    You’re afraid of the predator
    That hides along the way
    Not moving, just changing
    For your surroundings
    You're losing what you’re gaining
    To rest on a branch




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