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    dots Submission Name: Tao of the Landdots
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    Author: Porcelaine
    ASL Info:    21/F/Croatia
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 850/653/234
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsTao of the Landdots
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    On midnights…the wind gong sings
    To the samurai constellations
    As the cherry trees blossom
    In a nexus of diamond petals
    And furnace drops of dew

    Now silken are the roads of China

    And only starlit sky and rice lit fields
    Mourn again the rivers gold
    Where I take my brush again
    To paint the tea tree forest,
    And people of the dragons

    Who write through Wén-yán history





    Submitted on 2008-06-01 05:28:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A hauntingly lovely poem in every regard, and a perfect compliment to the illustration. I loved it, loved it, absolutely loved it! Bravo... Bravo!!! Michael
    | Posted on 2008-06-03 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      What a lovely poem, so rich with word pictures! The poem literally sings with mystic peace and an enthralling mind picture of midnight magic in China! Nice work lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2008-06-01 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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