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    Author: SuperMel
    Elite Ratio:    4.77 - 11/8/12
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Venting.


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    Does anyone see the point to life?
    Why even try?
    Wouldn't you rather just die?
    Instead of feeling like a fool because of that fact you cried?
    You lost.
    You let them win.
    They will point and laugh as you cry. Thinking, "Why did I try?"

    You now wish you had someone to talk too. And friend, someone who would listen, care, and be there. You could tell them what was on your mind. And maybe, just maybe, you'd feel, "Fine?"




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      This is so true
    Everyone of us need someone to talk to
    And it dosent have to be People either
    I have 2 cats that mean the world to me and besides my Family and the few Friends I have they are the most important creatures in the world to me
    They bring so much Love and I swear to you they know when Im hurting inside and depressed
    IO have read a couple of your works now and I seea lot of simalarities in how you feel and the way I used to feel and believe it or not still do at times
    Its all about keeping a positive attitude my Friend
    As I said before if you ever for any reason need someone to talk to Im Here
    Please PLEASE dont cut again
    Trust me its not worth it
    I am 39 years old my Friend and I still have scars on me from cutting and I Swear to you most of them I have no idea at all when and how I did that
    Its a quick release my Friend yes but the pain is still there
    There is ways to end that pain besides cutting
    I am Living proof
    I will be Praying for you
    REMAIN STRONG
    AND KEEP WRITING AS IT HELPS HEAL!!!!!!!!!
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-07-18 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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