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    dots Submission Name: Stone's Throwdots
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    Author: MC white
    ASL Info:    20/Male/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 71/73/45
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsStone's Throwdots
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    I'm a little tired of being down on myself.
    And the folks being down on me too.
    It was cool when I shared their views on the subject;
    when we all thought that I was a fool.

    But I've shaped a beginning of an ending I like
    a contentedly pleasant ever after.
    So I'm done defaming the man that I was
    done re-reading the preceding chapters.

    I was hoping the world would feel just like I do,
    that we would all take the new me at face.
    But everyone else is still stuck on the old.
    Old inequities, old me, old mistakes.

    So I plow ever onward through the ne'er tilled earth.
    Filled with stones that were once thrown at me.
    And though I was once a thrower myself,
    I, unlike they, have set me free.




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