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    dots Submission Name: Bean Sídhedots
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    Author: Porcelaine
    ASL Info:    21/F/Croatia
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 867/671/243
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 115
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsBean Sídhedots
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    You know of peril, you say
    But do you?
    In the crown of magenta…fluid death
    Drinking in it's glory with a choir of sunken souls
    And it's eyes reflect the netherworlds

    But oh, how I like it's opium stare

    Call me lucid in a strive for agony
    Call me monster
    And I'll cheer you from beyond the grave
    But always find my way back
    To kiss you again

    And hold

    'Till I sell you damnation
    As if I didn't know your innocence
    So I can make you
    In the atonement of forgetful pain
    To misconceive life

    And go







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      ... and in the mystery of 'real masks', we seek for the glorifying moment that gives us at once : the power of evil and the bliss of innocence. What we strive for as lost souls, is the pleasure of decadence and the pain of morals. Both illusion. Both, foundations of identity (lost...).
    | Posted on 2008-06-04 00:00:00 | by -Lith-Ium- | [ Reply to This ]
      this was a bit confusing for me- i think i have to reread it again. but i liked it.

    it had some powerful images, and good use of words; they were effective in establishing a mood, and giving texture to the piece.
    | Posted on 2008-06-03 00:00:00 | by TheStillSilence | [ Reply to This ]


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