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    Author: Sheakhan
    ASL Info:    22/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    5.66 - 167/183/82
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Prose/Depressed
    Total Views: 186
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 392



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    Fuck I can't write
    Fuck I can't write
    Fuck I can't write
    Fuck I can't write

    I hate writer's block
    I hate writer's block

    I want to choke myself
    I want to choke myself
    I want to choke myself
    I want to choke myself

    This is lame
    This is lame

    I quit.




    Submitted on 2008-06-03 16:30:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      great alliteration in your title...

    um.



    blatant, i guess.
    | Posted on 2008-06-12 00:00:00 | by zen-dog | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a very special poem....so very special it actually really made me smile on very bad day. There...it had a purpose.

    It's good you're trying....if you don't, you'll have writer's block forever. :) Been there.

    -dancer
    | Posted on 2008-06-03 00:00:00 | by dancer-of-words | [ Reply to This ]


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