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She says she doesn’t play guitar But can make it sing like a harp She’ll say she doesn’t know you But is good at guessing who you are And she is plagued by bad memory Of people, places, and things Or all that she has had That hurts to remember and keep And I was caught in the between Of where I was and where I wanted to be She had me standing there Wanting to run my fingers through her hair But I had nothing to say And her past tends to be discrete Sometimes that doesn’t matter to me When we all bear some scars That aren’t meant to be seen But I want to take her for a ride And look at myself in her eyes And say the transgressions of a man Aren’t the sins of mankind And I was caught in the between Of where I was and where I wanted to be She had me standing there Wanting to run my fingers through her hair But I had nothing to say She said she has been here before And hears it knocking at her door Asking her for what she can spare Like some kind of alms for the poor But I’m from the wrong side of the track And like wandering off the beaten path And if you can show me how to love I’ll help you remember how to laugh And I was caught in the between Of where I was and where I wanted to be She had me standing there Wanting to run my fingers through her hair And there’s was so much I wanted to say There was so much I wanted to say to you |
The story told is a wonderful tale, because of the naive viewpoint that the narrator seems to talk on. THe whole thing flows really well, although the syllables skip in some point, but that's a technical nitpick that doesn't really take away from the rest of the piece in most places. My favorite bit : "And if you can show me how to love I’ll help you remember how to laugh" This is a perfect end to the song. I can see a decrescendo here, then a little vault back to an almost silent chorus. At least that's what I heard in my head. but Maybe I'm crazy. Wonderful piece. Wishing for more ~Brian | Posted on 2008-06-05 00:00:00 | by Imadjinn | [ Reply to This ] | is this a new one? like did you recently write it? | its gorgeous. she makes me think of the black crowes talks to angels girl... you know? she never mentions the word addiction in certain company/she'll tell you she's an orphan after you meet her family etc etc i love the tenderness with which the voice of this song seems to sing... its like both the girl and the singer need healing and theres the potential that they'll be good for eachother... learning to love and to laugh are rather foundational for a positive existance ![]() i understand the tension completely... between being where you are and where you wanna be... being who you are and who you wanna be... its so hard... when you know you could be so much more but you dont know how to be it or what to do to make it happen... And say the transgressions of a man Aren’t the sins of mankind this is beautiful. right here. sometimes things need to be said like this... sometimes people take one happening and label the whole of everyone with it... like if one boy lies then all boys are automatically liars... and im guessing through the actions of the guy he will hopefully be able to SHOW the girl in a real way that not all boys are liars... actions usually speak louder than words aparently... this is really beautiful. its awesome to see a new post from you | Posted on 2008-06-04 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ] | I love this. I needed to read this. | Favorite lines: "And I was caught in the between Of where I was and where I wanted to be" I hope all is well with you. :) | Posted on 2008-06-04 00:00:00 | by borderlinetears | [ Reply to This ] | This is really a very well put together and beautiful write | This flows beautifully in song form and one cant help but getting caught up in your words I really enjoyed this!!! Im looking forward to reading more from you in the future Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You God Bless Ron | Posted on 2008-06-04 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ] | |