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    dots Submission Name: The Steep Stairsdots
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    Author: garnet4david
    ASL Info:    20/M/Indonesia
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 81/83/58
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 51
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 583



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       I want to know whether this one is romantic or not? Any comments, recommendations, or suggestions are appreciated.


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    dotsThe Steep Stairsdots
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    The stairs stand between us,
    it seems so narrow and steep.
    Everyday i take one step,
    trying to make us a step closer.

    The sun ray laughs at me,
    my sweats are flowing out.
    The rain cries for me,
    But, i can feel my heart smiles.

    The sky remains calm today,
    but the water rippling hard.
    Pretending like i smile,
    with the worry overwhelmed me.

    You tell me to stop climbing.
    Do you remember my promise?
    As long as ou wait there,
    i will definitely come to you.




    Submitted on 2008-06-04 07:42:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really enjoyed how this piece compared love to a stairway. It made it quite entertaining... it makes me wonder what happens when someone is pushed down the stairs... and if it would still be funny to watch them roll down them...
    | Posted on 2008-06-04 00:00:00 | by Old | [ Reply to This ]



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