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    dots Submission Name: Revengedots
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    Author: Rehian
    ASL Info:    17/Female/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 47/50/29
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 56
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 356



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    dotsRevengedots
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    I come closer with a chill
    Hopefully he took that pill
    There he is strapped to the chair
    Although he cannot bear
    The pain I give him now
    Will only make him bow
    Cuts and slashes one by one
    Until my revenge is done
    Only in my dreams shall he die
    Because only right now my knifes too shy




    Submitted on 2008-06-04 09:34:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Grotesque and Vengeful.

    ...I like it.
    | Posted on 2008-06-16 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]



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