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    dots Submission Name: Nightmaresdots
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    Author: Old
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 69/97/93
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       This poem is about the nightmares i get from time to time that are excessively violent and kinda just unsettling, so i tried more for feeling in this poem more than imagery...


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    dotsNightmaresdots
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    Thousands
    Impaled
    and skinless

    raining salt,
    they scream out
    in pain

    I saw you
    giggling
    disemboweled.

    it made me
    shudder.
    blood was everywhere.
    it made me sick.
    the smells of rotting flesh.
    i was angry.
    They wouldn't stop begging.

    an inner light
    cut out of someone's
    chest cavity.

    deeper down,
    there's nothing;
    a contorted view.

    exploring
    their insides
    i found unexistance.




    Submitted on 2008-06-04 16:59:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This work has a very deep meaning. You depicted the view of nightmare very clear in this work. However, i think sometimes nightmare is not that shudder hehe. I thought that the ending will be a hero who will come and save you from the nightmare. Hmm but yes nightmare is very terrible and make you sweating to death.

    - Dave -
    | Posted on 2008-06-04 00:00:00 | by garnet4david | [ Reply to This ]



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