Dont make me promise
or make me say it again
I feel my love is fleeting and if I try to cage it in
with the words
that you want
it will collapse and die
and I want
it to last
so I look down and sigh
when you plead with me lady
its a battle within
and you may not notice but
I always let me win
and I can't describe
or verbalize
or satisfy
your stare
so I run and hide
and sorta lie
till the truth is hardly there
I liked what you had to say here. It was a piece filled with condradictions and these are things that we all experience in our relations with members of the opposite sex. Your rhyme scheme was gentle and it worked well.
Submission Name: Freely Styled
