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Dont make me promise or make me say it again I feel my love is fleeting and if I try to cage it in with the words that you want it will collapse and die and I want it to last so I look down and sigh when you plead with me lady its a battle within and you may not notice but I always let me win and I can't describe or verbalize or satisfy your stare so I run and hide and sorta lie till the truth is hardly there |
I liked what you had to say here. It was a piece filled with condradictions and these are things that we all experience in our relations with members of the opposite sex. Your rhyme scheme was gentle and it worked well.| Posted on 2008-06-06 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ] | |