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    dots Submission Name: The Love Song of a Woman Taking a Sdots

    Author: Fougene
    ASL Info:    17/m/Saskatoon Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.57 - 23/22/39
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 650
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    dotsThe Love Song of a Woman Taking a Sdots

    My toes are pointed towards you,
    and my heels step
    on the lukewarm sand
    with trepidation.
    Frozen mechanical sailors
    row out of my heart,
    take pieces of you
    far away
    with computational precision.
    Ice cold giant steel boats,
    silent floating mental boxes,
    float and waver
    to the distant roar of the thundering rocky shores
    carrying with them
    some fragrant candles;
    a meal for two;
    an engagement ring;
    a shattered wine glass;
    many many tears;
    and the memory of it all.

    My toes are pointed towards you,
    towards ice cold giant steel boats.
    My heart pointed away from you:
    the other end of the compass
    walks back towards
    warm sandy beaches and thundering rocky shores.
    I stumble again.

    Submitted on 2008-06-05 01:18:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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