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    dots Submission Name: Anorexiadots
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    Author: revol
    ASL Info:    18/F/Far away from you
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 12/13/11
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 52
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 709



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       There are so many girls in the world who feel like this. This is my way of portraying their feelings.


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    dotsAnorexiadots
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    Starve myself to be someone
    Haven't eaten in three days
    But still I feel fine enough,
    I feel like I can fly
    The fourth day my weakness
    Beats me, kicks me in the gutter
    I have to eat, and have to drink
    I'm a weak piece of nothing
    My thighs are just so very very fat
    My stomach will really never be flat
    And I don't understand
    Why it's happening to me
    I just wanna be thin
    Like everybody else
    I don't want to be another fat girl
    Unnoticed and avoided
    Even if it costs me my life,
    I swear I'll be thin,
    I'd give up everything
    For a tiny waist.




    Submitted on 2008-06-05 12:21:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Eating disorders are a lot more complex than feeling fat... Having suffered from one for years, I feel like this is a pretty superficial generalization...
    | Posted on 2008-06-05 00:00:00 | by Pax Parvani | [ Reply to This ]



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