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    dots Submission Name: It's Wonderful Being A Girldots
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    Author: DBC
    ASL Info:    21/m/ar
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 55/59/29
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsIt's Wonderful Being A Girldots
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    it's wonderful being a girl
    as i twirl the dogs hair in my finger
    looking down i overload on the foot
    walking watching
    forward step forward step
    you always took after me
    eyes flutter-fuck and back to the paper
    one after the other

    you bought a box of bandaids
    twenty-four inside
    twenty-two for various abrasions
    and two for the cuts you call your eyes

    i stepped outside for a second
    and then again for a third
    i went forth into the light
    lit your cigarette
    smiled, asked how you where
    you where fine

    it was windy outside
    something that always seemed to anger you
    when upon opening your briefcase
    all your papers would blow away
    we watched them fly forward up into space
    somehow holding on
    driving tent steaks in our lawn




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    ||| Comments |||
      This has got me kinda confused. What is a "flutter-[censored]" dare I ask? The only lines that I really liked were these: "when upon opening your briefcase
    all your papers would blow away
    we watched them fly forward up into space"
    | Posted on 2008-06-08 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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