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    dots Submission Name: The accidentdots
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    Author: Ceasing End
    ASL Info:    16/girl/well... somewhere
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 15/17/16
    Words: 267
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 53
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1805



    Description:
       I wrote this after my best friend came over. We ended up kissing, and I was so confused about everything - was I lesbian or not? The being lesbian would be fine for me, except for the fact that mum is homophobic. Anyway. Enjoy.


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    It was an accident
    But now I'm confused
    It was just an accident
    But I've been trapped in a
    Web of helplessness

    Was it right?
    Was it wrong?
    Strange feelings don't belong
    But they're here, here to stay
    Will I always be this way?

    And now it's got me all confused
    I'm feeling dirty and abused
    Yes I know you're my best friend
    Let's hope our friendship will not end
    But was it right?

    I've been up all night
    Thinking about the incident
    I was crying all night
    Wondering what our friends
    Would say if they knew

    Am I right?
    Am I wrong?
    I don't feel like I belong
    I feel lonely and abused
    I am broken, I've been used

    Yes it has me all confused
    My life is shattered, I am bruised
    You're my best friend, you know
    But this can't be how it goes
    The question I'm still asking
    Was it right?

    Am I a dream?
    Was it a dream?
    Am I right or wrong
    Is all I want to know

    Yes it has me all confused
    My life is shattered, I am bruised
    You're my best friend, you know
    But this can't be how it goes
    The question I'm still asking
    Was it right?

    I guess there's nothing that can tell me
    No-one can tell me where I fell
    What's happening to me?
    Feeling broken and weak
    Where have I gone wrong?
    I've been here for so long
    Mourning my mistake
    How much more can I take?

    There's nothing left
    But my regret.




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    ||| Comments |||
      No, it's not right. You don't wanna go down that route girl. Like you said it was an accident but you know what? Accidents don't happen twice. You should really reconsider this relationship. You thought you were best friends but maybe she was just trying to get in your pants. Loosing a friendship is not such a big deal. Maybe you shouldn't see this person anymore. Try to find someone normal to hang with.
    | Posted on 2008-06-08 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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