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    dots Submission Name: Sunrise in Junedots
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    Author: Celeste J. Bell
    ASL Info:    21/Lady/never-never land
    Elite Ratio:    4.01 - 209/206/67
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 76
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 593



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       My Love, Anthony Vincent Errichiello.


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    dotsSunrise in Junedots
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    I feel this beat
    This beat in my chest
    And it gives off a heat
    A heat unlike the rest

    I feel lighter
    When you are by my side
    I feel brighter
    With no secrets left to hide

    I hold no shame
    No tears, no regrets
    No trials in vein
    For we are better than the rest

    I hold your hand
    Right to my heart
    And you felt it stand
    True from our start

    Forever I give you
    And always I pray
    To be the best for you
    And be that best everyday.




    Submitted on 2008-06-07 22:31:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sweet poem.......it's got quite a merry and warm tone throughout that brings the summer sunshine to one's mind......good way of putting it..... enjoyable read : )

    | Posted on 2008-07-24 00:00:00 | by mdsouza | [ Reply to This ]
      I loooooooved your poem!!
    I cannot believe it doesn't have any comments yet!!
    I think it is very well rhymed and it somehow makes you smile! It is sweet and simple!
    I'm living a love like that right now actually, and I think I'll follow what you say and work everyday to be the best.
    Congrats!
    | Posted on 2008-06-08 00:00:00 | by rachel gless | [ Reply to This ]



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