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    dots Submission Name: Officially unbaerabledots
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    Author: rachel gless
    ASL Info:    20/f/mx
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 68/86/34
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 45
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 993



    Description:
       I've been going through a lot of problems with my family because they just don't understand the way I live and the way I love and they keep underestimating it and that has generated doubts on myself. But I'm over with that!!


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    dotsOfficially unbaerabledots
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    Officially unbaerable
    How this life has become

    Are there different ways to live
    or different ways to love?

    Are there in life some choices
    that go against the rules?

    Or if you break the mold,
    does that mean that you're wrong?

    You have to be sweet, tender
    to be the perfect bride

    If you don't follow standards
    your love is useless now?

    Rules make you cuestion yourself
    your feelings, your pride too

    I love the way I know
    I live my life my way

    I'm building my own rules
    I'm baking my own pains

    My family, my friends
    The world, everyone else

    I wish took one step back
    Stop torturing my mind

    Stop saying that I'm wrong
    and my feelings are low

    My thoughts rotten are not
    They're just the way I know




    Submitted on 2008-06-08 17:57:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    This was written very well. I wasn't exactly descriptive, you've left me in a mysrery. (nice) I know the feeling of having your family not agree with the way of life you choose. It sucks, so I'm glad your past it. Just remember it's your life, live it the way you want and everything will be fine.
    Keep up the awesome work and I'll keep reading

    »Haely«
    | Posted on 2008-06-09 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]



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