you play on contrast so perfectly, maybe even better than I do; but it's not yin and yang with your writing- it's more like a battle between the two. and hell, if two things [opposite effects] that NEED each other to simply be/be recognized feel the need to fight and be seen above the other- what kind of peace is there TO hope for? on any level?
"I have a dream- but nobody cares, nobody wants to listen"
"I'd die in your arms , if you were dead too"
keep arguing amongst themsevles over which one accompanies this write better :P
either way hun, good shit, remind me never to get all trippy on a roller coaster though, ya know, just in case.