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    dots Submission Name: A demons dreamdots
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    Author: dismentled
    ASL Info:    24/M/"South of Heaven"
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 619/553/204
    Words: 183
    Class/Type: Poetry/What is
    Total Views: 63
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1295



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       its like a roller coater ride....on crack


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    dotsA demons dreamdots
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    I am beautiful
    I am ugly
    I am wretched
    Unto the bone;
    I am hated
    I am nothing
    So perfect
    When you’re all alone

    So wake up
    And tell me its over,
    Fall to sleep
    To forget these dreams.
    All these tragedies
    Rolling over
    As everything you knew
    Is just as I seem

    Hand me a shotgun
    I’m feeling horny
    Put a bullet
    Right between your legs
    Tell me you’ll smile
    When I bleed for you
    Tell me you’ll die
    When I do it too

    Nightmares and tragedies

    Hurricanes, forgotten dreams
    ….
    An eclipse
    On your broken heart
    …..
    Death of life
    Is merely
    Just where you start

    So tell me it’s over
    Tell me it’s true
    That what you tell me
    Is unparalleled proof
    That this is just the ending
    The beginnings soon
    A breathe from
    Everyday life
    Soon enough
    It’ll be longing too

    For you’ve never hated
    You’ve never loved
    Yours sins are pure
    If even enough
    An angelic thought
    Is what it seems
    Even in the wake
    Of a demons dream




    Submitted on 2008-06-08 19:24:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      dude this poem is awesum it just flowed. i lyke when u say death of life iswhere u start


    thats kool.



    peace
    grim
    | Posted on 2008-08-19 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      Nightmares of the past, present and future surrounding you. searching your soul for answers. Great piece. Keep writing
    | Posted on 2008-07-18 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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