Description: Ah..I got bored and just started writing. Hope you like it, if not..then..too bad
I Want You To -------------------------------------------
Put your arms around me
Treasure me and shield me to safety
With your whole heart as your sword
Teach me in ways I’ve never learned
Make me a promise
A promise to hold on even after we kiss
With your eyes still locked with mine
As the sun wakes and bask its shine
Reassure our everlasting future
That we will not only endure
But experience the things we’ve dreamed
Outshine those that were filmed
Take my tears and bury it ocean deep
Prevent heartaches and put me to sleep
Be the person I see as I open my eyes
Till the day comes when we’ve lived our lives
This is so beautiful. What you want is so rare, but if it wasn't than it wouldn't be a beautiful as it is! I like the last stanza the best, and enjoy how you look at life as a whole. You have a variety of syllables for your beat, for ex. the first lines, (5, 6, 10, 9!) It is still very good though,
thanks for the read.
Submission Name: I Want You To
