Prince of Squeaks by Max Million

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Author:	Max Million
ASL Info:	16/M/DRA
Elite Ratio:	2.57 - 30/52/66
Words:	178

Class/Type:	Poetry/
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Prince of Squeaks dots

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Sitting on my throne of thorns
I toy with your emotions
I am your God, man of worms
Allow me to introduce myself

I am the Prince of Squeaks
Lord of the Insane
God of Madness
Tea?

Laugh you may
No difference to me
When the tower falls, and Rhye subsides
You shall no longer be free

Curse the blessed altar boy
His favorite, his weak knight
One day, this bastard son
Will show the world what’s right

I am the Prince of Squeaks
Lord of the Insane
God of Madness
Tea?

Of course you want some
Why would you not
I’m one hell of a guy
But be wary my dear, this world is rot…
With danger and greed
And corruption and doom
Quite pleasant, don’t you agree

I am the Prince of Squeaks
Lord of the Insane
God of Madness
Tea?

Now we come to a fitting close
The curtain is pulled up
My actors disperse and you clap, but my dear
The show must go on

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  Max I know you told me this was one of your best pieces... and ive read through a lot of your stuff, so I can say accurately. This poem is great, and its perspective is unique, but all your poems are pretty good dude... seriously I think they all stand out in their own ways.

This one was so intensely insane, intricately so. Its like the Mad Hatter from Wonderland, you were all over the place, but proper at the same time. That one you really could share a cup of tea with in some crazy fictitious setting. Your rhyme.. and style... and even choice of words is so unique and inspirational that its easy as hell to visualize and live this experience. The beginning of the 6th stanza has to be my total favorite.
| Posted on 2008-07-14 00:00:00 | by Passionbyapathy | [ Reply to This ]
  I love this. I totally agree with Ms. Understood. It has this type of beautiful madnees which just pulls you in and makes you want to be a part of it.

-Elissa
| Posted on 2008-06-12 00:00:00 | by hateyourlove | [ Reply to This ]
  I absolutely love this poem. Its like being in a serial killers head. The confusion , the madness. Its most definitly getting added to my favorites list and your going to be added to my stalk list. Good job Max. Keep it up
~ Ms.Understood
| Posted on 2008-06-10 00:00:00 | by Rehian | [ Reply to This ]

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