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    dots Submission Name: Loving youdots
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    Author: annezah
    ASL Info:    19/f/long island NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.5 - 14/15/16
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 785
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 445



    Description:
       this is to my love in hopes that for one day we will be together <333


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    dotsLoving youdots
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    Love Can Overcome Anything,
    If You Try,
    It Will Work.
    If You Give Up,
    It Will Shatter.
    The Feelings Are There,
    But No Matter What,
    The Distance Between Is So Far.
    Across The State,
    Across The Country,
    Or Over Seas,
    The Love For Eachother Will Always Be.
    And If You Try Your Very Best,
    Then Maybe...Just Maybe, You Two Will One Day Unite.




    Submitted on 2008-06-09 07:25:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What an amazing poem! I think it represents someone special lol. :)
    | Posted on 2008-06-10 00:00:00 | by shadowmere88 | [ Reply to This ]


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