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    dots Submission Name: I Have Knife In My Handdots
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    Author: The Poets Will
    ASL Info:    15/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/2/2
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 48
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    Description:
       Basically Chris Leone is stupid as fuck.Based on a true story. I would like to thank Chris Leone For inspiring me for this short piece.


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    dotsI Have Knife In My Handdots
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    What was that? I heard it, did u? He tells me he's proud to be my inspiration but little does he know I could give two shits. He carves things out of wood with a razor blade. When someone brushes past him he threatens to cut them with the knife. Then I eye the blade and realize he's not shitting anyone. I take the knife and slice his throat and lacerate every inch of his body. He screams and twitches and I laugh till I bleed from the throat. Then reality comes back to me in full view and I realize he still sits next to me in my technology class. I sigh and wish that what I had dreamed actually happened. I wish as he continues to laugh and make stupid worthless comments. I turn back to my computer and write what is currently happening. The insanity of it all. Could I be the next Jack the Ripper? Who knows. Chris Leone could drive anyone insane enough to do it.




    Submitted on 2008-06-09 09:29:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like it. It seems like you really did let out your emotions & anger. And as Keegansaid if you become a crazed murderer I too would want an autograph before they catch you :D

    -Elissa Robertson
    | Posted on 2008-06-11 00:00:00 | by hateyourlove | [ Reply to This ]
      Visceral, truthful, but uninteresting to most individuals not knowledgeable of the actual situation.

    This lacks form and direction, the flow awkward and interrupted.

    But on the other side, I doubt that was what you wanted to accomplish here.

    So it hardly matters in this instance.

    Keep spewing out what you feel, it'll do you good.

    And if you do become a frenzied murderer, i want your autograph before they catch you.

    ~Keegan Gilmore
    | Posted on 2008-06-09 00:00:00 | by Sheakhan | [ Reply to This ]
      You know what's funny, most people would think this was fiction. When little do they know, it actually happened.

    Anywho, it is very morbid, but that is expected from you so you didn't disappoint. Maybe we could try for a sequel on Wednesday? Then again, we have the final that day. (coughcoughwriteaboutLinncoughcough)
    | Posted on 2008-06-09 00:00:00 | by Max Million | [ Reply to This ]



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