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    dots Submission Name: Sardanapalusdots
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    Author: Algol46
    ASL Info:    200/m/East of Eden
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 1039/1113/532
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       Sardanapalus--possibly a mythical king of Assyria, or perhaps the Greek name for Assurbanipal (667BC-627BC) last king of Assyria.


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    The tears have dried that mourned you long ago,
    Sad Sardanapalus, the mighty lord!
    For you the stars, the very stone gods roared
    In palaces where now the deserts grow,
    And evil winds ill spirits chase and blow,
    Your tomb is dust and all your gods ignored,
    And peerless Nineveh put to the sword,
    And all is waste from flood plain to plateau.

    Sardanapalus, was it dissemblers
    Who then deceived you in that final time,
    Struck with wrath and guile like giant temblors,
    Or some slim girl, so cool, with eyes sublime?
    And does her voice still whisper on the air,
    “My liege, Sardanapalus,” though no one’s there?




    Submitted on 2008-06-09 14:59:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The stories told only by the wind still caress my heart. I live for the sound of the legends and the silence of knowledge. Thank you!
    | Posted on 2008-06-12 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      I took the trouble to look up Sardanapalus, and the death of Sardanapalus on this one. It seems he died poorly, and his soul must blow within the desert winds, unsated and without satisfaction. It was written that he had his worldly possesions destroyed and his concubines put to death, before setting himself on fire, upon news of loosing a battle.

    His ghost would seem to join the many restless and tormented ghosts of nobles and kings who lived lives of excess and debauchery!

    Excellent write, my talented friend!
    | Posted on 2008-06-10 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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