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    dots Submission Name: Prelude, in D sharp major "raindrop" , Odots
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    Author: every48seconds
    ASL Info:    16/M/Everywhere
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 97/113/103
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Story/Society
    Total Views: 57
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 580



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       hehe need a way better title


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    dotsPrelude, in D sharp major "raindrop" , Odots
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    And as everyone runs away
    Children dropping there favorite toys
    And grown humans discarding common understanding
    As buildings crumble and disintegrate into the depths
    As technology does little but rust and decay and the human life is parted from its shell

    One young couple stays seperate from the rest within a music store
    Prelude, in D sharp major "raindrop" , Op. 28/15
    The most relaxed thing they know
    As the world ends
    Humanity ceases, life cut short

    A single raindrop
    Hope




    Submitted on 2008-06-09 16:44:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very pretty. I liked it. :D

    -Elissa
    | Posted on 2008-06-12 00:00:00 | by hateyourlove | [ Reply to This ]


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