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    dots Submission Name: Fortune Smiles Upon the Foolsdots
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    Author: Jason_Clement
    ASL Info:    17, male
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 147/149/61
    Words: 207
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    Fortune Smiles Upon the Fools
    By Jason C. Clement.

    Where did all of the good times go?
    Watching the sun dance to the radio;
    Night came, and we were wishing on the stars,
    hoping that we would make it more than far.

    Then I fell asleep one day,
    Drifted out further to sea;
    You became so far away,
    Temperament enclosed on me.

    With each broken moment, I’m learning to live,
    with each fragile heartbeat, I’m learning to give;
    I’m hoping in your eyes its truth that I see,
    ‘Cause you’re the one that I need to breathe.

    I wish that I knew half of what I knew then,
    but I got lost – don’t know where and don’t know when;
    Still you found me, and your smile promised it’d be alright,
    and now I’d stay forever, just with you clothed in night.

    ‘Cause I fell asleep on that day,
    And drifted out to open sea;
    But you came, from far away,
    And your smile promised me.

    With each broken moment, I’m learning to live,
    with each fragile heartbeat, I’m learning to give;
    I’m hoping in your eyes its truth that I see,
    ‘Cause you’re the one that I need to breathe.




    Submitted on 2008-06-09 19:17:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Jason
    Another incredible write packed with sincere honest emotion
    Have you sold any of your songs yet Jason ?
    You have got to try my Friend because Im telling you you have an INCREDIBLE talent with lyrics
    I Loved how this song created the vision in my mind of a peaceful boat journey knowing the other side holds much promise and reward
    I honestly tell you Jason I can feel the waves hitting my boat with me waiting to reach that side reading this
    You never cease to amaze me my Friend!!!
    Please drop me a PM I seriously want to write a song or write together with you
    You are in my opinion the most talented songwriter on this site and Honestly one of the most talented I have read period
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-06-12 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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