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Something new (for once)

Author: Sephiroth
ASL Info:    22/Male/WA
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Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Serious
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Just some thoughts. I'd rather not get any smart-ass comments about how the structure sucks or anything like that. I'd like some advice or something.

Anyways, here's the deal: I am going to college, along with only a few of my good friends. The rest of my friends are going to other colleges or elsewhere. The future scares me, and I don't know how to think.

Something new (for once)

The end has come
The waiting stops here
Will I move on?
Or will I cling to my past?

As those I love move apart
As those memories cherished run
I find myself lost
As to what I can do

To move on means to forget
To stay means to give up
I fear the answer will never come
This is the end of high school.

Submitted on 2008-06-10 01:14:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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